Thursday, March 02, 2006

En Español Por Favor

I'm trying something different today, A Limerick in a different language!  It's very crude in legibility and my Spanish is all wrong, but I like how it sounds when spoken.  Perhaps that's all I can ask right now as my writing skills definitely need some polish.  What do you all think?

Si puedes tener buen suerte
Tenías la sangre más fuerte.
Si piensas amor,
No tengas sabor,
Porque no quisieres la muerte.

2 comments:

Amy said...

poetry in another language! interesting. try one in mandarin. :)

Mark said...

Seeing as my Spanish skills hover somewhere around the second grade level, I'm not sure my Mandarin could compete.

Now, if I wrote one in Japanese....